New Feature! Poet’s Corner

Saturday, March 3rd, 2007

Hi UltraMom Fans. Lately I have been trying my hand at a couple of different writing millieaus, and since I don’t feel like tackling the Kamakura day right at this moment, I am going to “treat” you to my attempt at free form poety.Comments, either good or constructive appreciated.

Loneliness

When have I spent time alone with no distractions,
With no demands on my time,
Without the company of others?
Alone is not hard for me…...for awhile….
for a few hours, for a few days…
Then I begin feeling disconnected,
As if my emotions and conclusions
Will turn out to be flawed when exposed.
Innately, I don’t think we are meant to be alone too long.
Or, why would something in my soul
Cry out for another voice, for a touch?
For validation.
And yet, I know I’ve never truly known it.
I hope I never will.

By UltraMom at 07:02 AM Link to this post here!
2 comment s


  • on March 5th, 2007 03:39 AM UltraBob said:

    I guess I should call my Mommy more often?

  • on March 5th, 2007 06:41 PM Jessica said:

    I was gone for a few days so I had to do a bunch of catching up on my reading. It was a good poem, and I’m waiting for the next one.